The real rewrite for cruit.dev
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Their hero headline: “Get hired for what you shipped with your agent.”
That’s an aspiration-label headline — it names the destination (being hired) without naming the mechanism that makes cruit.dev different from updating your LinkedIn or writing a résumé. An AI builder landing here asks: how does this actually surface my agent work to the recruiters who matter? The headline doesn’t answer it.
One sentence fixes it.
Before: “Get hired for what you shipped with your agent.”
After: “Your agent work becomes a recruiter-searchable profile in 5 minutes — no résumé rewrite, no keyword game, no GitHub grind.”
Same product. The before names the aspiration; the after names the object the product creates, the time it takes, and the three alternatives it eliminates. Below is the full rewrite.
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“Get hired for what you shipped with your agent.”
The gap: Aspiration-label — names the destination (being hired for agent work) without naming how cruit.dev gets you there. An AI builder comparing profile and portfolio tools cannot determine in four seconds what specifically changes for them versus updating LinkedIn or their GitHub README. The mechanism — recruiter-searchable indexing by stack, recency, and shipped artifacts — is the differentiator, and it’s invisible in the hero.
Rewritten H1 — paste-ready
“Your agent work becomes a recruiter-searchable profile in 5 minutes — no résumé rewrite, no keyword game, no GitHub grind.”
Names what the product makes (recruiter-searchable profile), the time investment (5 minutes), and the three things it replaces (résumé rewrite, keyword optimization, GitHub grooming). Fails the 3-product test — LinkedIn, Polywork, and GitHub Pages all offer developer profile surfaces but none frame it as recruiter-searchable by stack and shipped agent work in 5 minutes. This line only belongs to a product that actually indexes agent work for recruiter discovery.
Rewritten hero subhead — paste-ready
“Recruiters find you by stack, recency, and shipped projects — not by how well you described your work in a PDF. cruit.dev indexes what you built, surfaces it where hiring teams search, and keeps it current without maintenance.”
The dollar logic — why this gap costs you
"Get hired for what you shipped with your agent" is accurate and confident — the product is genuinely about helping AI builders get recognized for their agent work. But an AI builder landing here is carrying a specific fear: I've shipped agent work and recruiters aren't finding it. The headline names the destination (being hired) without naming the mechanism that makes cruit.dev different from a well-written LinkedIn update. H2 tells the differentiator — "Recruiters find you by stack, recency, and shipped projects" — but that sentence is doing the heavy lifting one scroll below where most visitors read. The rewrite moves the mechanism into the hero: "recruiter-searchable profile" names what the product actually makes (not just where you'll end up), "5 minutes" names the contrast against the alternative (a résumé overhaul), and the three negations — no résumé rewrite, no keyword game, no GitHub grind — name the failure modes an AI builder is already tired of. That's the buy: not just the destination, but confidence that this specific path gets there without the things they've already tried and abandoned.
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